I'm not you

[poppoetry]

Thanks for having a read and taking the time, sorry it confused and perplexed you and a bigger apologise for grammar, punctuation or lack there of, the poem is about someone that irritates the writer but it's not a relative, the poem is tongue in cheek, thanks for the critique, I'lll amended the poem to make it more sensible if you will.

Maybe I'm being dense--but I'm having a hard time "getting" this piece.

My takeaway is that the subject is pleased to not be like someone s/he abhors (someone that maybe the subject is expected to be like? Such as a mother or sibling?).

I'll just comment on one global concern.

The punctuation/capitalization drove me bonkers because I can't make sense of it, lol. The first stanza as a sentence makes sense. But then there isn't another period for two more stanzas, and grammatically that doesn't work. Later there's a phrase "irritating busy body" ended by a period, which also isn't gramatically accurate.  I spent a lot of time during my reading trying to figure out the significance of the punctuation and re-reading sections trying to make then fit.

My reading experience would improve with more consistent punctuation or no punctuation.