06-13-2015, 11:44 PM
My latest verse, I done it yesterday and had a completely different rhyming scheme and reworked it completely,it's easy and accessible but helps me to practice, practice, practice, I'm still looking for that poetic nugget.
I'm not you.
somewhat superior
cosmic and great
see bubbles' walls
not for debate.
mixed up and mental
not on the page
preposterous and perplexing
It's an outrage
you can't see it
you're so unaware
you're not locked up
I'm shallow don't care.
perpetually seek admiration
always pursuing praise
cunningly look out for yourself
consumed by issues you raise.
an irritating busy body.
old people give you time
you ruffle my feathers
you inspired this rhyme
I'm beholden this day
not inflicted like you
abhor your batty ways
blessed really, I'm not you.
poppoetry
© June 2015.
I'm not you.
somewhat superior
cosmic and great
see bubbles' walls
not for debate.
mixed up and mental
not on the page
preposterous and perplexing
It's an outrage
you can't see it
you're so unaware
you're not locked up
I'm shallow don't care.
perpetually seek admiration
always pursuing praise
cunningly look out for yourself
consumed by issues you raise.
an irritating busy body.
old people give you time
you ruffle my feathers
you inspired this rhyme
I'm beholden this day
not inflicted like you
abhor your batty ways
blessed really, I'm not you.
poppoetry
© June 2015.