06-13-2015, 01:12 PM
I didn't get "swipe right" or "swipe left". It feels like they were placed there just to have something to rhyme with? I don't get the title, I could be missing something though... Tinder, as in something to start a fire, is that a vague reference to the "fire of passion"? It don't know. I feel the humor in this though and, I love it.
I look forward to reading your rewrite, and since you already mentioned improving the meter, no need to comment there.
I look forward to reading your rewrite, and since you already mentioned improving the meter, no need to comment there.
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.

