Love Me Tinder
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I didn't get "swipe right" or "swipe left". It feels like they were placed there just to have something to rhyme with? I don't get the title, I could be missing something though... Tinder, as in something to start a fire, is that a vague reference to the "fire of passion"? It don't know. I feel the humor in this though and, I love it.Smile I look forward to reading your rewrite, and since you already mentioned improving the meter, no need to comment there.
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.
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Love Me Tinder - by staciamberdawn - 06-07-2015, 09:05 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Erthona - 06-07-2015, 01:29 PM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by staciamberdawn - 06-07-2015, 11:45 PM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Erthona - 06-08-2015, 03:26 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Balor1712 - 06-11-2015, 06:50 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by billy - 06-11-2015, 10:44 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Julia.rose.q - 06-13-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by staciamberdawn - 06-13-2015, 09:23 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 01:12 PM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by kaijoy2 - 07-14-2015, 04:21 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Mark A Becker - 07-16-2015, 02:20 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Quixilated - 07-16-2015, 06:29 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by joesammsington - 07-30-2015, 11:52 AM



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