Tasting Notes

[milo]

Milo, good feedback, thanks!

The comment about the "still" interests me. When I wrote it, I figured being called "complicated" by a guy isn't usually a good thing, so you know, despite that he STILL prefers...Do you think complicated doesn't come across as typically negative? Or it does, but the still isn't providing the meaning I intended it to?

Others, feel free to chime in as well!

Actually, that is a great question. I considered that maybe what you were going for but, like most poets, complicated seems pretty cool to me.  I think maybe most people prefer complicated these days - the stigma may be a little old fashioned which is why I called it out.  If you consider complicated negative than the turn works fine.