06-13-2015, 11:50 AM
Milo, good feedback, thanks!
The comment about the "still" interests me. When I wrote it, I figured being called "complicated" by a guy isn't usually a good thing, so you know, despite that he STILL prefers...Do you think complicated doesn't come across as typically negative? Or it does, but the still isn't providing the meaning I intended it to?
Others, feel free to chime in as well!
The comment about the "still" interests me. When I wrote it, I figured being called "complicated" by a guy isn't usually a good thing, so you know, despite that he STILL prefers...Do you think complicated doesn't come across as typically negative? Or it does, but the still isn't providing the meaning I intended it to?
Others, feel free to chime in as well!