06-13-2015, 11:08 AM
Oooh good idea, thanks!
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(06-13-2015, 08:14 AM)Leanne Wrote:
*innards
To fix your meter in the first stanza, I'd suggest a quick bit of surgery:
My first time at this kinda doc
has made me kinda nervous.
(Mom assures me it's not bad
to get this kind of service)
-- but damn, haven't we all been there?
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Poetry is a matter of life, not just a matter of language. ~~ Lucille Clifton