Tasting Notes

[milo]

I finally found the one to call mine,
who likens me to a drink of fine wine:

Complicated.

Still, he prefers me for the quality,
miraculously. With him, I am free.

I think "Tasting notes" is a great title.
L2 gets a little too Seussian imo with the mine-fine-wine which makes it difficult to take seriously.


The end seems like it wants to be a turn, but it doesn't capture the effect of a turn. "Still" is the indicator. It is like reading the sentence " . . . he is a great person, still he is good".