06-13-2015, 09:35 AM
Leanne
I was trying to add more poetic-ness and depth to it with the "deepest chasms" and "the human condition", didn't work out too well, I suppose.
I'm still trying to figure how to create an image that has depth, without using the abstracts, soul, spirit etc. I think I have a preconceived notion of what is meaningful, that I seriously need to drop. Thanks for your comment, it's really helpful!
Forestdawn
Thank you, that means a lot to me, now it feels like I've accomplished something. Thank you so much for your kind encouragement.
I was trying to add more poetic-ness and depth to it with the "deepest chasms" and "the human condition", didn't work out too well, I suppose.
I'm still trying to figure how to create an image that has depth, without using the abstracts, soul, spirit etc. I think I have a preconceived notion of what is meaningful, that I seriously need to drop. Thanks for your comment, it's really helpful!
Forestdawn
Thank you, that means a lot to me, now it feels like I've accomplished something. Thank you so much for your kind encouragement.
I relish writing bad poems, if it means someday I'll write a good one.