Tasting Notes

[Julia.rose.q]

Thanks for the feedback, Leanne! I love how readers see what we're blind to. I picked miraculously early in the process because I wanted to emphasize the subject's incredulity at being valued FOR complexity, but I later revised the above line to include "still" which accomplishes the same thing, more subtly.

I like the idea of extending the wine metaphor. Maybe I'll change the last line to something like "He savors my nuance. With him, I'm free."

Thanks for giving me something to chew on!