06-13-2015, 06:31 AM
Amanda,
Let me give some thought to that stanza--see if I can elevate it while leaving the speaker disengaged. Mention is a better choice I agree.
Appreciate the time you spent with it. Thank you.
Best,
Todd
Let me give some thought to that stanza--see if I can elevate it while leaving the speaker disengaged. Mention is a better choice I agree.
Appreciate the time you spent with it. Thank you.
Best,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson