Sonnet Thingy About Love

[Merrikay]

I can sort of see where you're going with it, but it seems you were really focused on the rhyming, which lessened the meaning for me. As someone mentioned, the "thee" feels really out of place compared to the rest of the piece. Some of your word choices do give me some feels though, frustration, haha. I could be way off, just my two cents.