Sonnet Thingy About Love

[QDeathstar]

Found the sonnet practice thread, and i vowed to write a freaking sonnet. Just didn't turn out too good. This is my first real attempt at any sort of meter or rhyming scheme, so that's most what i was focusing on. Afraid the actual words don't make much sense...
My love for thee you do not dare compare.
So who is it that I love, if not you?
This confusion is such that I can’t bear.
You don’t love me, so if not you then who?
This is not pain more than a sense of dread,
for the next time your name comes up…JUST STOP!
Your face rattles around inside my head,
for everything else you must have just caught.
The friends, the music and even the math,
is gone in place of just a dumb young girl.
Oh God I feel I need to take a bath.
If I don’t calm I think I may just hurl.
I have to think of something that's not you,
I have to think of something that’s not blue.

I don't know... I mean it doesn't say a whole lot... and the only sense I can make out of "something that's not blue" is that you needed something to rhyme with you.

how bout ending it with a quote "here comes a lie, we will always be true"... seems more fitting.

I agree that stop and caught don't work, mainly because none of your other rhymes are slant rhymes and so it's glaringly out of place.

my love for thee? Who says thee anymore. I don't think talking strangely adds value to the peice
I'm not qualified to judge meter, as I just can't grasp the concept....