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Love Me Tinder
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06-11-2015, 06:50 AM
I only have on criticism that stuck out to me (also a novice). In the second stanza, the first two lines have a nice rhythm which is then thrown off by the next two (“We should get a beer.” and My shirt is only slightly sheer.) which do not share the same meter (if I'm using that correctly)and do not relate to each other. Concerning the content, I think it's great! Yes, it is full of cliches... but then again, so is Tinder.
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Love Me Tinder - by staciamberdawn - 06-07-2015, 09:05 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Erthona - 06-07-2015, 01:29 PM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by staciamberdawn - 06-07-2015, 11:45 PM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Erthona - 06-08-2015, 03:26 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Balor1712 - 06-11-2015, 06:50 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by billy - 06-11-2015, 10:44 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Julia.rose.q - 06-13-2015, 05:06 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by staciamberdawn - 06-13-2015, 09:23 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Merrikay - 06-13-2015, 01:12 PM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by kaijoy2 - 07-14-2015, 04:21 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Mark A Becker - 07-16-2015, 02:20 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by Quixilated - 07-16-2015, 06:29 AM
RE: Love Me Tinder - by joesammsington - 07-30-2015, 11:52 AM
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