06-11-2015, 02:32 AM
Found the sonnet practice thread, and i vowed to write a freaking sonnet. Just didn't turn out too good. This is my first real attempt at any sort of meter or rhyming scheme, so that's most what i was focusing on. Afraid the actual words don't make much sense...
My love for thee you do not dare compare.
So who is it that I love, if not you?
This confusion is such that I can’t bear.
You don’t love me, so if not you then who?
This is not pain more than a sense of dread,
for the next time your name comes up…JUST STOP!
Your face rattles around inside my head,
for everything else you must have just caught.
The friends, the music and even the math,
is gone in place of just a dumb young girl.
Oh God I feel I need to take a bath.
If I don’t calm I think I may just hurl.
I have to think of something that's not you,
I have to think of something that’s not blue.
My love for thee you do not dare compare.
So who is it that I love, if not you?
This confusion is such that I can’t bear.
You don’t love me, so if not you then who?
This is not pain more than a sense of dread,
for the next time your name comes up…JUST STOP!
Your face rattles around inside my head,
for everything else you must have just caught.
The friends, the music and even the math,
is gone in place of just a dumb young girl.
Oh God I feel I need to take a bath.
If I don’t calm I think I may just hurl.
I have to think of something that's not you,
I have to think of something that’s not blue.
Sometimes I feel like writing poetry and sometimes I watch Netflix. No judging.