Baby eyes (with music version of an old poem)

[Balor1712]

I'll admit, at first I wasn't a fan. And then... I kind of got hooked? Your verse melody has a trance-like quality although the transitions between each one snapped me out of it. I would recommend varying those somewhat (and just as an aside, a pop-filter is well worth the money to get rid of the pesky popping noise when you make a "p" or "b" sound!).

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