Life of a day
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(06-09-2015, 03:45 AM)Mr. Creosote Wrote:  Shorter version

"it gets noisy and then less noisy"

OK...and?

I am being a bit snarky.  I am sorry.  I just don't know what the point is.
Well in my opinion the point of poetry is to describe ordinary and extraordinary scenes, ideas or feelings by using different literary techniques, such as style or rhythm, to help the reader understand what the author is experiencing and feeling. This is my definition and idea of the life of a day, although it being a simple and quotidian subject.

Thanks for your feedback,

Alex
Some poetry - www.alexbex.net
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Messages In This Thread
Life of a day - by Alexearth - 06-01-2015, 12:10 AM
RE: Life of a day - by Rederex - 06-01-2015, 05:34 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Alexearth - 06-05-2015, 11:59 PM
RE: Life of a day - by DivineMsEmm - 06-06-2015, 04:24 AM
RE: Life of a day - by reppindetroit - 06-04-2015, 08:05 AM
RE: Life of a day - by DivineMsEmm - 06-05-2015, 08:44 AM
RE: Life of a day - by Mr. Creosote - 06-09-2015, 03:45 AM
RE: Life of a day - by Alexearth - 06-09-2015, 05:24 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Mr. Creosote - 06-10-2015, 12:23 AM
RE: Life of a day - by Magpie - 06-09-2015, 05:51 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Alexearth - 06-09-2015, 06:02 PM
RE: Life of a day - by billy - 06-09-2015, 06:18 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Alexearth - 06-09-2015, 09:31 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Magpie - 06-10-2015, 12:19 AM
RE: Life of a day - by Alexearth - 06-12-2015, 07:45 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Magpie - 06-12-2015, 10:33 PM
RE: Life of a day - by Forestdawn - 06-14-2015, 06:19 AM



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