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06-09-2015, 11:50 AM

(06-09-2015, 11:40 AM)srijantje Wrote: just the first 2 lines would do fine in my opinion

june is jealous
spring
bored into summer

I think you are exactly right SJ. "Hissing" may have been an indulgence. Thanks! Thumbsup

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6-7-15 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-08-2015, 05:30 AM

RE: 6-7-15 - by billy - 06-08-2015, 05:49 PM

RE: 6-7-15 - by RiverNotch - 06-09-2015, 03:23 AM

RE: 6-7-15 - by srijantje - 06-09-2015, 11:40 AM

RE: 6-7-15 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-09-2015, 11:50 AM

RE: 6-7-15 - by Magpie - 06-09-2015, 06:05 PM

RE: 6-7-15 - by Todd - 06-09-2015, 10:14 PM

RE: 6-7-15 - by Tiger the Lion - 06-10-2015, 12:11 AM

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