The Day Before It Ended (Revision 2-3-13)

[Todd]

I was struggling to write a new poem, and I realized the issue is that poem was this one with different imagery.

No poem is ever really done (so comments are always welcome--change can always occur). Here's the main reason for the bump. I'm considering another title for this: "The Leidenfrost Effect"

Just hoped to get some opinions on that.

I don't usually bump for small edits, but I want to make sure that it still fits if I make the change.

Thanks all,

Todd