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Get Away
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06-08-2015, 01:15 PM
Thank you all for your comments, I might rework it a bit, definitely great feedback!
-"You’d better tell the Captain we’ve got to land as soon as we can. This woman has to be gotten to a hospital."
--"A hospital? What is it?" -"It’s a big building with patients, but that’s not important right now." |
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Get Away - by Animal Riots Activist - 05-28-2015, 07:00 AM
RE: Get Away - by shemthepenman - 05-28-2015, 08:43 AM
RE: Get Away - by buildthestars - 05-29-2015, 03:32 AM
RE: Get Away - by Animal Riots Activist - 05-29-2015, 01:38 PM
RE: Get Away - by Municipal Alchemist - 06-02-2015, 07:22 AM
RE: Get Away - by billy - 06-02-2015, 08:20 AM
RE: Get Away - by billy - 06-02-2015, 08:36 AM
RE: Get Away - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 06-07-2015, 12:01 AM
RE: Get Away - by Nyxx - 06-07-2015, 07:13 AM
RE: Get Away - by Animal Riots Activist - 06-08-2015, 01:15 PM
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