06-08-2015, 10:19 AM
Kind of hoping this is satire and sarcasm, honestly, because if not, it's terrifying, which I suspect is the message you're going for anyways. If you ARE being sincere with what you're saying in this poem, then let it be known that this approach has good shock factor for a first read, but then upon further readings, sounds like a boy in 8th-10th grade in his anarchy phase, trying to Rage Against the Machine and Stick It to the Man.
If you were TRYING to sound like one of those boys to point out how ridiculous they're being, then good job.
If you were TRYING to sound like one of those boys to point out how ridiculous they're being, then good job.