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Silence
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06-07-2015, 12:57 AM
(06-05-2015, 09:21 PM)Qdeathstar Wrote: Thank you for all your comments. A number of you have questioned the last line... I just wanted to say that I wanted the last like to read different and unmetered, after time. Wonder if you can do with spacing? Time has failed him-- all things shall pass. just a thought. |
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Silence - by QDeathstar - 06-04-2015, 08:30 AM
RE: Silence - by michael the tenant - 06-04-2015, 10:05 AM
RE: Silence - by bena - 06-04-2015, 11:21 AM
RE: Silence - by reppindetroit - 06-04-2015, 12:17 PM
RE: Silence - by Rose Lanabell Cat Ear - 06-04-2015, 12:21 PM
RE: Silence - by DivineMsEmm - 06-04-2015, 09:54 PM
RE: Silence - by QDeathstar - 06-05-2015, 09:21 PM
RE: Silence - by bena - 06-07-2015, 12:57 AM
RE: Silence - by clairethaoduong - 07-08-2015, 12:11 PM
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