An Afternoon with a Friend

An Afternoon with a Friend

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06-06-2015, 06:04 PM

Thanks for the feedback everyone! I've acted on it, and I think that it has improved the poem considerably. I'm sure there are still ways I can improve, so I'd love to hear some more critique as to how the revision flows.

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An Afternoon with a Friend - by Observer - 06-06-2015, 09:24 AM

RE: 21st Century Philosophy (first post) - by staciamberdawn - 06-06-2015, 10:52 AM

RE: 21st Century Philosophy (first post) - by Todd - 06-06-2015, 11:37 AM

RE: 21st Century Philosophy (first post) - by Erthona - 06-06-2015, 01:33 PM

RE: An Afternoon with a Friend - by Observer - 06-06-2015, 06:04 PM

RE: An Afternoon with a Friend - by Todd - 06-06-2015, 10:40 PM

RE: An Afternoon with a Friend - by Observer - 06-07-2015, 09:00 PM

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