Masturbation - Edit
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I like this, but I think the last lines need to read:

"It's just another night alone." 4 accents, which matches the other lines.

Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?

The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
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Masturbation - Edit - by Wjames - 06-06-2015, 11:57 AM
RE: Masturbation - by Erthona - 06-06-2015, 02:02 PM
RE: Masturbation - by tectak - 06-06-2015, 08:50 PM
RE: Masturbation - by poppoetry - 06-06-2015, 11:07 PM
RE: Masturbation - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 06-06-2015, 11:54 PM
RE: Masturbation - by Wjames - 06-08-2015, 06:25 AM
RE: Masturbation - by billy - 06-08-2015, 05:48 PM
RE: Masturbation - Edit - by Wjames - 07-18-2015, 03:58 AM
RE: Masturbation - Edit - by ellajam - 07-18-2015, 05:12 AM
RE: Masturbation - Edit - by Wjames - 07-22-2015, 05:08 AM
RE: Masturbation - Edit - by tectak - 07-29-2015, 07:17 AM



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