The Passionate Man
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Yes, how often do depressed (or, once passionate) people respond "fine", when asked how their day went, or how they're feeling?

I liked the transition from god to hell in the second stanza as well.
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The Passionate Man - by Erthona - 06-06-2015, 10:57 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by Wjames - 06-06-2015, 11:51 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by Erthona - 06-06-2015, 01:58 PM
RE: The Passionate Man - by tectak - 06-06-2015, 04:10 PM
RE: The Passionate Man - by Erthona - 06-07-2015, 01:55 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by tectak - 06-07-2015, 09:21 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by Erthona - 06-07-2015, 11:54 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by tectak - 06-07-2015, 04:21 PM
RE: The Passionate Man - by poppoetry - 06-08-2015, 05:39 PM
RE: The Passionate Man - by RiverNotch - 06-09-2015, 03:03 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by Lizzie - 02-07-2017, 09:00 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by Erthona - 02-08-2017, 07:51 AM
RE: The Passionate Man - by vagabond - 05-09-2017, 07:44 PM
RE: The Passionate Man - by nibbed - 05-09-2017, 10:24 PM
RE: The Passionate Man - by ellajam - 05-09-2017, 11:37 PM



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