brand new poet, be gentle

[staciamberdawn]

Hi

First and foremost i really like your word choices it really does bring a royal and grand feeling to the piece.
I do take issue with line 9-12 as the rhyme scheme is different that the others and then in the last stanza, as mentioned before there is a completely different flow.

I think this is a great building block and with some adjustments and additions it could be very lovely