06-04-2015, 12:38 PM
Interesting dynamic, although I'm not sure how all of this falls into place. Try asking yourself what your trying to say..it's not being said very clear.
Again, the lines in itself are very intriguing and interesting to read. Get that focus and this poem can excel.
Again, the lines in itself are very intriguing and interesting to read. Get that focus and this poem can excel.