Bus Routes As Origami

[Leanne]

I will come back to this when I've read it through a few more times -- I just didn't want you to think it was languishing without any interest. First impressions though: the twisted syntax challenges me by creating lots of ambiguities and in most cases I really love this. There are a few times it doesn't quite work for me but again, I'm going to need to sit with it a while to decide whether that's actually true, because meaning shifts might take a while to appear. I enjoy the terseness of the delivery, almost a series of vignettes, with that fantastic incongruity of origami, rock and steel.

Just give me a while to do it justice.