06-03-2015, 09:19 AM
I’m new here myself, I think that the idea behind the poem is fine and you did a good job of conveying emotion in your style. I’d end it with Can I still love you?
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Can I PLease Love You? - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 05-18-2015, 05:39 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by Erthona - 05-18-2015, 10:13 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by billy - 05-18-2015, 05:46 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by Jae Mc Donnell - 05-19-2015, 02:04 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by Hematite12 - 05-19-2015, 12:17 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by RiverNotch - 05-22-2015, 10:45 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by BlowMyWadsworth - 05-27-2015, 12:11 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by kiwiyana - 05-31-2015, 07:14 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 06-06-2015, 09:28 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by paxtecum - 06-03-2015, 09:19 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by Rederex - 06-03-2015, 10:23 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by mgood - 06-04-2015, 11:00 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by Tryingtobe_____ - 06-04-2015, 04:52 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by ellajam - 06-04-2015, 08:05 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by poppoetry - 06-05-2015, 01:32 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by QDeathstar - 06-05-2015, 10:24 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by jbw1277 - 06-06-2015, 12:42 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by staciamberdawn - 06-06-2015, 06:47 AM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by jasmine+clovers - 06-06-2015, 07:40 PM
RE: Can I PLease Love You? - by pdvarona - 07-22-2015, 04:32 PM
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