06-02-2015, 06:02 AM
(05-29-2015, 05:41 PM)billy Wrote: you wank on my back i'll well okay maybe not.Hi Billy,
hi em and welcome to the site.
we try not tear them apart as much as carefully dissect them and lay them out like ones own lungs that have been placed over one's own shoulders. read some of your feedback ...thumbs up
just to clear things up;
do you stop animals rioting
(05-27-2015, 05:52 PM)Animal Riots Activist Wrote: Hi all,
I'm Animal Riots Activist. I'm in my mid 20s, and I'm a physicist by day and I write poetry in the day too sometimes. But mostly at night. Over the past couple of years I've gravitated away from forums, as the lack of having a face/voice/style etc to put to a poem sort of irked me, and I had a community in which I pushed myself and others to write. That community has now faded a bit (as it turns out you can get burnt out from writing poetry), so I'm back in the forum fold. From the critiques I've already done it seems like you all are pretty varied in poetic style, which is great. So I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work, and hopefully we all can influence each others work. But not too much. There is an inherent masturbatory nature in poetry, but too much circlejerkery can quickly lead to artistic stagnation.
Best,
Animal Riots
p.s. I like nothing more than to have my poems torn apart. So all you vultures, please have a field day whenever I post.
Thanks for the feedback feedback! And no, I'm just an activist for rioting animals. There are some indelible rights that are denied to animals during most modern animal riots, and I'm just an activist to decry the denial of those rights and inform the public. Stampedes are just not what they used to be, nor locust swarms, nor butterfly migrations.
-Em
-"You’d better tell the Captain we’ve got to land as soon as we can. This woman has to be gotten to a hospital."
--"A hospital? What is it?"
-"It’s a big building with patients, but that’s not important right now."
--"A hospital? What is it?"
-"It’s a big building with patients, but that’s not important right now."