06-01-2015, 05:34 PM
Hi,
I love the simplicity of your writting, saying as much as you can with as little as you can. Just a couple of things I would draw your attention to, you use the word 'constant' in the opening line and 'grows' in the fourth, I thought it was a little bit strange to have something constant grow. Just check your definitions, something which is constant is quantitatively fixed. Other than that...superb!
I love the simplicity of your writting, saying as much as you can with as little as you can. Just a couple of things I would draw your attention to, you use the word 'constant' in the opening line and 'grows' in the fourth, I thought it was a little bit strange to have something constant grow. Just check your definitions, something which is constant is quantitatively fixed. Other than that...superb!