Can I PLease Love You?

[kiwiyana]

You came to class drunk.
I know we aren’t speaking,
but you were, are, my
First.
I want to know what is wrong but...
she tells me this is normal.

This is not normal.

You got a tattoo yesterday…I’m worried.
You said you were past it, but is anyone really past it?
I’m not.
You said you didn’t like me,
like that,
but I like you, like that.
Can’t I still be worried? Can’t I still love you?
Will you ever let someone love you?

Hi,
love is something unexplainable, but special.
In your work, you are trying to convey how much you love this person correct?
If so, maybe the use of more adjectives would be prudent....

I have a query..... who is this 'she' you have mentioned? Is her character significant?

Yana