05-31-2015, 05:44 AM
Hey all,
I appreciate all the critiques and advice, there's some really good stuff in there. Honestly, I didn't know squat about meter until Animal Riots Activist and Billy mentioned it, so that in and of itself is extremely valuable. The practice poetry seems like a great tool to hone your writing skills as well, I'll be sure to use it! I'm not sure if I'll edit this poem specifically, but I'll be sure to be writing, posting, and critiquing more in the future.
Much love.
I appreciate all the critiques and advice, there's some really good stuff in there. Honestly, I didn't know squat about meter until Animal Riots Activist and Billy mentioned it, so that in and of itself is extremely valuable. The practice poetry seems like a great tool to hone your writing skills as well, I'll be sure to use it! I'm not sure if I'll edit this poem specifically, but I'll be sure to be writing, posting, and critiquing more in the future.
Much love.