Breathing Water
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I lay defeated on rotted wood
deep ocean all around me.
I would escape here if I could,
but the only way is drowning.

Oh, take me to a better day,
take me to a dryer place.
Please, please, oh please just stay.
Wreck my sorrow, restore my grace.





inspired by a short story i wrote, which was based on a Macklemore song (Otherside).
Sometimes I feel like writing poetry and sometimes I watch Netflix. No judging.
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Breathing Water - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 05-27-2015, 09:16 AM
RE: Breathing Water - by BlowMyWadsworth - 05-27-2015, 10:23 AM
RE: Breathing Water - by Grace - 05-27-2015, 08:53 PM
RE: Breathing Water - by heslopian - 05-28-2015, 05:58 AM



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