05-24-2015, 04:55 AM
yes, the switch of "palms" and "thumbs" works a bit better. i think it's the abundance of "m" sounds that's throwing that whole section off for me, but only when i read it aloud. and again, it could just be me and the way i'm reading it.
one thing though, do you use a palette in pottery other than to paint the finished product? if not, then you wouldn't be moving your palms and thumbs across one, would you? i suppose you could use the term as an overarching metaphor of sorts. my knowledge of pottery is pretty limited, other than one short class i took in college, so please forgive me if i'm being ignorant.
one thing though, do you use a palette in pottery other than to paint the finished product? if not, then you wouldn't be moving your palms and thumbs across one, would you? i suppose you could use the term as an overarching metaphor of sorts. my knowledge of pottery is pretty limited, other than one short class i took in college, so please forgive me if i'm being ignorant.