ACTS OF DEALS

[tectak]

ACTS OF DEAL
Dare not, whisper to chief.
Well everybody knows
Greed took firm of crowns
It’s a mischief
That drove us out of Eden

It’s cold darkness
Shine not
‘Cause it’s a ray
That dims within

The untold forbidden
Were open secrets, just hidden
In scattered files and minds of fathers
Well, it grew to character.

The jury so keen
But sprouted deals
Invaded by the chief’s kin
And case handled so seal
Then charged no sin
Dimmed within

Where is the ground?
Where true firm words are found?
Well, everybody knows
It’s beyond acts of deals.

Hi barb,
This is posted in novice forum but I do believe there is an elephant in the room. Someone has to say this and it may as well be me. It does not make any sense at all, by any definition. At my best guess you wrote something down in plain english then took every word to the Thesaurus and found what you mistakenly thought was a synonym or at least had an alternative but distantly derived meaning. I cannot imagine why anyone would do this unless they were under the naive impression that no one would notice. Even your "explanation" is hidden in a downpour of gobbledygook but very tellingly DOES contain spelling mistakes and interesting variations in grammar and syntax. I can offer no solution to your problem until you 'fess up and indicate by return in a plain brown envelope what it is that you want.

Here are the options. Tick where applicable:
Grammar, use of.
Words, meaning of.
Syntax, construction of.
Punctuation, necessity of.
Meter, purpose of.
Rhyme, option of.
Metaphor, clarification by.

There is a feeling that your grasp of english is tenuous to say the least but as you make no spelling mistakes in the poem and have lapsed at least once into vernacular ('cause but NOT coz) I am unconvinced that it is a "first language" issue UNLESS my initial thinking above is correct. In either case, you need help to make something worthy out of this "gibberish" (quote A. N. Other).
In that, I wish you well and a speedy recovery should you be suffering from some undisclosed medical condition.
Best,
tectak