Heels
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(05-22-2015, 08:33 AM)Erthona Wrote:  Thanks for the correction Paul, I will use all Smile

Dale
Was just reading up a little more on the whole damned thing and I have changed my mind.  Hysterical
Since your use of "damn" is within a sort of dialogue, it is technically not incorrect. Further, it is likely far more familiar to both the speaker and the audience. Long story short "Damn" works better than "Damned" for this poem.

Paul
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Heels - by Erthona - 05-22-2015, 03:41 AM
RE: Heels - by Tiger the Lion - 05-22-2015, 05:54 AM
RE: Heels - by Erthona - 05-22-2015, 08:33 AM
RE: Heels - by Tiger the Lion - 05-22-2015, 10:39 AM
RE: Heels - by Erthona - 05-22-2015, 11:30 AM
RE: Heels - by Tiger the Lion - 05-22-2015, 11:53 AM
RE: Heels - by milo - 05-22-2015, 11:55 AM
RE: Heels - by Barbito - 05-22-2015, 04:58 PM
RE: Heels - by RiverNotch - 05-22-2015, 10:29 PM
RE: Heels - by Mr. Creosote - 05-22-2015, 11:22 PM
RE: Heels - by tectak - 05-23-2015, 06:21 AM
RE: Heels - by Erthona - 06-06-2015, 03:06 PM
RE: Heels - by ellajam - 06-14-2015, 08:56 PM



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