05-22-2015, 10:39 AM
(05-22-2015, 08:33 AM)Erthona Wrote: Thanks for the correction Paul, I will use allWas just reading up a little more on the whole damned thing and I have changed my mind.
Dale
Since your use of "damn" is within a sort of dialogue, it is technically not incorrect. Further, it is likely far more familiar to both the speaker and the audience. Long story short "Damn" works better than "Damned" for this poem.
Paul

