05-22-2015, 02:25 AM
You seem to have a tense problem. This is a good initial idea, but it does not seem to be developed well. A large part of the material seems mostly to be filler, but still has tremendous amount of potential.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.