Tea

[Barbito]

Twisted leaves
Unfurled by warmth
Releasing a pleasing aroma
Slow steam curling
Leaves rise and fall and rise again
Unsure of where they belong
Floating with the few
Mingling with the many
They all end up at the bottom of the strainer

There is such a big idea in this, but it tells so much less of the entirety of the matter of Tea.
From my view, writing of this nature should have a purpose and a massage it should tell to its audiene, so that when you read it you are maveled by a big theme well put in tea like generals taking tea schemeing art of war, politicians ,Boston Tea party, ect, if that is not done then master on you rhyming and rhythm partners so that it is very interesting to read and memorize, in fact it can be a poem a mother would sit and tell their children whenever they have Tea.
From the writing of this, I can tell the potential of your ability to do better because of the mastery of language. Thank you.
Read John Barleycorn.