05-20-2015, 04:16 PM
(05-20-2015, 10:23 AM)Erthona Wrote: Ton wrote:Agreed. Agreed.Agreed.Agreed.Already agreed.
"Pick where you punctuate.
Shiva moves. The earth moves. Love kills many.
Shiva moves the earth.Moves love. Kills many.
Shiva moves. The earth moves love. Kills many.
Does it. Matter."
For most people the line breaks would be indicative enough without further punctuation, but for the intellectually incontinent I suppose a more obvious way of punctuation might be needed. Besides, this is SJJ's post and I do not want to be hijacking it. Plus I wanted to mention that when one is in one of those type situation things become hyper-real, as his last line brings into focus so well.
Dale
Agreed?
Best,
te tam

