05-20-2015, 10:23 AM
Ton wrote:
"Pick where you punctuate.
Shiva moves. The earth moves. Love kills many.
Shiva moves the earth.Moves love. Kills many.
Shiva moves. The earth moves love. Kills many.
Does it. Matter."
For most people the line breaks would be indicative enough without further punctuation, but for the intellectually incontinent I suppose a more obvious way of punctuation might be needed. Besides, this is SJJ's post and I do not want to be hijacking it. Plus I wanted to mention that when one is in one of those type situation things become hyper-real, as his last line brings into focus so well.
Dale
"Pick where you punctuate.
Shiva moves. The earth moves. Love kills many.
Shiva moves the earth.Moves love. Kills many.
Shiva moves. The earth moves love. Kills many.
Does it. Matter."
For most people the line breaks would be indicative enough without further punctuation, but for the intellectually incontinent I suppose a more obvious way of punctuation might be needed. Besides, this is SJJ's post and I do not want to be hijacking it. Plus I wanted to mention that when one is in one of those type situation things become hyper-real, as his last line brings into focus so well.
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.