Flying or Falling? (Edit)

[Barbito]

I will take the persona to be female, because of the emotional dependency portrayed in the whole of the poem. I could illustrate them but I will get to the real item.
The poem flows, chronology of things happening and emotionally development is well done but I think it is a bit more of a prose to small degree.( just saying, this can be negligible) consider this linessure that your love would go on forever
and maybe yours did.,

the dead stems in my hands,
I tried to pull back.
Shortening those lines and others may improve the poem and its tone.
I enjoyed to read it a lot. And I would like to know what was your inspiration? The persona(supposedly a girl) is the one with "issues" in this kind of relationship because of the empty promises
"the dead stems in my hands, , disappointed she
I tried to pull back.. But the boy is in total control of her that she wants to be free.
for ever wanting to be
free.
She finally finds her a way to be free,
I hit the cold cement,
unable to fake attraction anymore
and I seem to have
broken my trust
I think she did something to upset him, and there he too felt fed up.
I feel am totally wrong in this interpretation. Get me to your truck, and shade more light