yes to about everything you pointed out, the double space is a carry over from my notepad.
you're the 2nd to comment on the upside simile and i've only had two replies so it looks like a 100%, maybe it needs working on,
will take take heed of the decree line and see if it can be better done
yes to kilt being changed. from hence forth kilt will be gish.
i'll see if anyone else has input and do an edit in a day or two. thanks for taking the time and trouble to read and leave constructive feedback
one small edit but it waa a big mistake so i'll mention it, kilt/] has been changed to gish, aka fanny [english one]
a proper edit will be forthcoming
you're the 2nd to comment on the upside simile and i've only had two replies so it looks like a 100%, maybe it needs working on,
will take take heed of the decree line and see if it can be better done
yes to kilt being changed. from hence forth kilt will be gish.
i'll see if anyone else has input and do an edit in a day or two. thanks for taking the time and trouble to read and leave constructive feedback
one small edit but it waa a big mistake so i'll mention it, kilt/] has been changed to gish, aka fanny [english one]
a proper edit will be forthcoming