05-18-2015, 06:14 PM
thanks for the feedback. the poem was done in reply to someone saying they write in the english style of word while also using syntax from the classic
styles.
you are so right about kilt
? was a stupid typo, god knows why i pressed that key; that;s it, it's next to the period key which i should have pressed.
speller should be uncapped as you point out
i always thought of pish as a Scottish word though i could be wrong.
the water to fish simile is reversed on purpose. if it doesn't work, it doesn't work and i'll think about revising it.
scone is there because it's a especially English aberration that's eaten in t houses at 4 pm throughout the uk in quaint villages
i was slagging KFC down for it's American roots.
kilt will be changed to gish, it's a dish best served warm
the poem was an attempt at a villenal ...i always get one of the damn rhymes wrong
anyway, thanks for the feedback, i will utilise most of what you pointed out and think about the odd parts i'm not totally agreeable with.
styles.
you are so right about kilt
? was a stupid typo, god knows why i pressed that key; that;s it, it's next to the period key which i should have pressed.
speller should be uncapped as you point out
i always thought of pish as a Scottish word though i could be wrong.
the water to fish simile is reversed on purpose. if it doesn't work, it doesn't work and i'll think about revising it.
scone is there because it's a especially English aberration that's eaten in t houses at 4 pm throughout the uk in quaint villages
i was slagging KFC down for it's American roots.
kilt will be changed to gish, it's a dish best served warm
the poem was an attempt at a villenal ...i always get one of the damn rhymes wrong
anyway, thanks for the feedback, i will utilise most of what you pointed out and think about the odd parts i'm not totally agreeable with.