05-14-2015, 10:31 AM
(05-13-2015, 03:03 AM)Jae Mc Donnell Wrote: Slowly, slowly, catchy monkey!Um, I'm not quite understanding what's going on.
He catches fire, the house burns down
And in his wake left, ash, disaster,
andĀ smouldering lips on still laughing clowns
So why not move in?
It's a room with a view,
of the end.
No need to rent.
It's our's to sell,
Right!?
What are you trying to convey?
There seems to be alot going on but no meaning, context, emotion, feeling etc.
This is just my humble opinion. As a reader I am quite confused...
