Doubt (Revised)
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Shem, thanks for the feedback. You are the first to give me feedback on the site and I really appreciate it.

I completely agree on "cut" word versus "loosen". Loosen is a lazy word and unfortunately I was lazy on the first line.
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Messages In This Thread
Doubt (Revised) - by Mr. Creosote - 05-13-2015, 08:17 PM
RE: Doubt - by Shem - 05-14-2015, 12:10 AM
RE: Doubt - by Mr. Creosote - 05-14-2015, 04:43 AM
RE: Doubt - by Todd - 05-14-2015, 05:01 AM
RE: Doubt - by Mr. Creosote - 05-15-2015, 04:49 AM
RE: Doubt - by Todd - 05-15-2015, 05:07 AM
RE: Doubt - by Todd - 05-15-2015, 05:09 AM
RE: Doubt - by Mr. Creosote - 05-15-2015, 09:44 AM
RE: Doubt (Revised) - by RiverNotch - 05-16-2015, 12:11 AM



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