Nothing Alike

Nothing Alike

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05-08-2015, 02:27 AM

For me, it feels like the last line could be expanded upon a little bit, but at the same time it's great the way it is. The spacing is good, it reminds me of how important visual presentation is in a poem.

Awesome job overall Smile

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Nothing Alike - by gingerquiet - 04-29-2015, 10:28 PM

RE: Nothing Alike - by Todd - 04-29-2015, 10:43 PM

RE: Nothing Alike - by RiverNotch - 04-29-2015, 11:34 PM

RE: Nothing Alike - by gingerquiet - 04-30-2015, 08:53 AM

RE: Nothing Alike - by just mercedes - 04-30-2015, 09:53 AM

RE: Nothing Alike - by thebrokeanarchist - 05-01-2015, 11:56 AM

RE: Nothing Alike - by i.might.be.a.bit.sad - 05-02-2015, 09:24 AM

RE: Nothing Alike - by YolaSm - 05-07-2015, 06:28 AM

RE: Nothing Alike - by phenomena - 05-08-2015, 02:27 AM

RE: Nothing Alike - by clairethaoduong - 07-08-2015, 11:44 AM

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