05-08-2015, 01:46 AM
Before I analyse this poem further, I would like to say, I love it.
I like what I think it means, some kind of truth only known by individuals, we always try to explain but I guess poetry does it better, like this one.
"locked inside your head, locked behind your door"
Wow! I want to believe innocence of the Baby of Dawn has
Made to be locked behind its own door fot its own safety.
Well it turns out curiosity of the Baby of Dawn is growing big
It has quest to learn so that it finds its own way.
"no one knows that you bear inside you a little baby thorn.
Let it feed, let it grow, let it bleed
and soon enough you will be able to leave."
This Baby equiped to face life and its challenges from whatever
It may learn till that day it crawls outside the door.
Wow!
What was your actual inspiration?
I like what I think it means, some kind of truth only known by individuals, we always try to explain but I guess poetry does it better, like this one.
"locked inside your head, locked behind your door"
Wow! I want to believe innocence of the Baby of Dawn has
Made to be locked behind its own door fot its own safety.
Well it turns out curiosity of the Baby of Dawn is growing big
It has quest to learn so that it finds its own way.
"no one knows that you bear inside you a little baby thorn.
Let it feed, let it grow, let it bleed
and soon enough you will be able to leave."
This Baby equiped to face life and its challenges from whatever
It may learn till that day it crawls outside the door.
Wow!
What was your actual inspiration?