05-07-2015, 09:09 AM
(Hello everyone, this is the first poem I post in this site. I feel very insecure about my writing because English is not my first language, forgive any silly mistakes but please point them out. I am very open to criticism. Thank you in advance)
"Baby of the Dawn"
Young soul, pure soul, baby of the dawn,
locked inside your head, locked behind your door,
forgive your mommy and your daddy for your crying storm.
Young soul, pure soul, baby of the dawn,
no one knows that you bear inside you a little baby thorn.
Let it feed, let it grow, let it bleed
and soon enough you will be able to leave.
A home has never been a place for the obscene,
it's not your home when it's a crime scene.
Old soul, wise soul, baby once born in dawn,
you lit the skies as you crawled your way outside that door.
"Baby of the Dawn"
Young soul, pure soul, baby of the dawn,
locked inside your head, locked behind your door,
forgive your mommy and your daddy for your crying storm.
Young soul, pure soul, baby of the dawn,
no one knows that you bear inside you a little baby thorn.
Let it feed, let it grow, let it bleed
and soon enough you will be able to leave.
A home has never been a place for the obscene,
it's not your home when it's a crime scene.
Old soul, wise soul, baby once born in dawn,
you lit the skies as you crawled your way outside that door.