05-07-2015, 12:01 AM
I think the problem for me in last s is that you mention you're on the phone. So you aren't in the same room talking, you personally can't know she isn't listening, unless Paul says so. Which needs to be clarified, I guess.
There is a great poem here, keep up the struggle, and I'm sorry about your friend's wife. I would offer nursing advice, but I'm sure you know hospice is the end.
As for the title...yeah needs some re-thinking. "on the rocks" implies either divorce or drinking problems to me.
Why not be simple for (us) simpletons..."A Dying Marriage" ?
I don't know, I'm sure something will come to you.
BIG HUGS
mel.
There is a great poem here, keep up the struggle, and I'm sorry about your friend's wife. I would offer nursing advice, but I'm sure you know hospice is the end.
As for the title...yeah needs some re-thinking. "on the rocks" implies either divorce or drinking problems to me.
Why not be simple for (us) simpletons..."A Dying Marriage" ?
I don't know, I'm sure something will come to you.
BIG HUGS
mel.