The Schism of Word and Number (Revision)

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The Schism of Word and Number (Revision)

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05-05-2015, 05:33 AM

I did a slight revision, not sure if it improved. I'm still too close to it.

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The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 11:34 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 12:14 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 12:24 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-10-2013, 12:30 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by serge gurkski - 02-10-2013, 07:59 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-10-2013, 08:57 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-11-2013, 03:00 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 03:35 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by cidermaid - 02-11-2013, 04:45 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 02-11-2013, 09:31 PM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Anne - 04-30-2015, 02:28 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 04-30-2015, 07:15 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by milo - 04-30-2015, 07:01 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number - by Todd - 04-30-2015, 07:17 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Todd - 05-05-2015, 05:33 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Anne - 05-05-2015, 07:54 AM

RE: The Schism of Word and Number (Revision) - by Todd - 05-05-2015, 10:48 AM

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